Nancy asks…
Rate My rap Lyrics (1-10)?
Cry me a river until it shivers, starts to stop tearing up" Once, I cried one, but had to build a bridge just to get over it, in the long run" As Songs spun, Stunned my past had become, strong to none" Writing, right from the wrong life was like, it didn't even belong to some" A son-set to rise, insist upon being yourself" Even if it meant, fitting in the outcast of a misfit" Originality was my last piece, and I missed it" Now, feeling blue without my final blue-print" And with this cycle of trials" My youth is still a lost child" Amusement my rivals produce it, while I spiraled" in an abusive abyss" hitting back at emptiness" Mindful of stupid hypocrites, they dissed, ignorance" Left for dead,ahead with lead, threads-chained to chains of every last thing, you ever said, to change" Led to a world of pain, my pages bled stains became heels over head, when my feelings fled" To spread-their hatred, until I feel them" Shred in fear" With Chills-Shaquille Kills them pairs" And he'll steal the wheel, to steer, you people to kneel" Taking a knee, to a new me" Directed to drill a new second ideal, as it hits my core" More than ever before, your cold corpse is dead to me" Destiny lets settle the score" So, once more ignore me, as I only restore" You thugs can just tug a war, in-order to take the floor" But you must, waste the flames" to begin smoldering-sparks" from off my touch" Just a little rap, in a hours top...anyways, do you think I should contine writing, and please comment and rate. Thank you!
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That was actually pretty good(:
Donna asks…
Are these good lyrics?
Chorus : Leave me be I lost myself into my memory let me see, you've had enough from my own Freefall, freefall learn to fall wihout my call Verse 1: don't know where to go don't know if I should run pain seems to come naturally when your life is undone all in needed was to show you Verse 2: Where have I been looked around the corner and I became blinded you were heels over head for another we'd taken risk and it flew away verse 3: I let the wall down found myself, i'm myself trying too hard dreaming of change just let fo and feel yourself Verse 4: I don't want you can't you understand, you put me on breathless and took out your hand now it's finally gone Bridge: I try, I fall just to lose it all you never hear me I'm ready to move on And what would you change? THANKS!
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WOW...THAT WAS AWESOME. REALLY BEAUTIFUL LYRICS. YOUR REALLY TALENTED AND BLESSED WITH A GIFT FOR WRITING LYRICS. GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR MUSIC CAREER...
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