Your Questions About What Are Heels Without Heels Called

Susan asks…

Is there anywhere I can get these ballerina shoes, without the heavy sole/rocking h?

I'm in love with lace up ballerina shoes, and I like these: http://img706.imageshack.us/i/balletd.png/ a lot. But the heel and the lack of it in my huge foot size are killing me. Where can I get normal, none heeled shoes like these? What are they called?

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I was just googling and came across this product hope it helps you Demonia by Pleaser Women's Gothika-200 Platform Boot synthetic Manmade sole Shaft measures approximately 15" from arch Heel measures approximately 3 3/4" Platform measures approximately 1" Boot opening measures approximately 14 1/4" around 3-3/4" Heel http://www.amazon.com/Demonia-Pleaser-Womens-Gothika-200-Platform/dp/B0013KYHAA/?tag=rtvhh-20 Also check out at ebay there are many good reatilers selling this product at good price http://rover.ebay.com/rover/1/711-53200-19255-0/1?ff3=4&pub=5574865779&toolid=10001&campid=5336440665&customid=rtvhh&mpre=http%3a%2f%2fshop.ebay.com%2fi.html%3f_nkw%3dCowgirl%2bboots%26_sacat%3d0%26_odkw%3dCowgirl%2bboots%26_osacat%3d0%26_trksid%3dp3286.c0.m270.l1313 ***

Carol asks…

Do you like my short story? 10 points! I promise you it's short!?

Selene and the girl were taking refuge in a nearby safe house, trying to remain inconspicuous among the humans. It had been not even a week since they had escaped from Antigen, finding Michael had proven to be harder than they had anticipated. Each day Selene grew more and more concerned that her mate was dead and she would never get to know her father, though she didn't voice her concerns to the eleven-year-old. The vampiress turned to her daughter who was reading the book. "What are you reading?" she asked. "Taken" Selene nodded "how about Eve?" the vampiress asked after a brief moment of awkward silence, her daughter looked up. "What?" she asked. "The name Eve, would you like that to be your name?" Selene asked. The young hybrid nodded "Eve, I like it! Where did that name come from?" "Well, Eve was my mothers name, and she was also the first woman on earth according to the bible, I think it would suit you, since you're the first born hybrid that's ever existed" Selene told her, she stood up and headed towards the back room to go to bed when Eve called: "Mother! What's daddy like?" Selene sighed "Well, he has dark blonde hair, it almost looks brown, he's tall, Michael would always joke about how short I was without heels on compared to him, and he's the sweetest man you could ever meet, or have for a father" the vampiress explains. "Mum, do you think father's alive?" "Of course I do! Eve, never once in the twelve years that I have known your father I have never once doubted him, do you understand? We'll fin him, and I promise you that he will be alive" Selene assured her, Eve sighed and laid down in bed beside her mother and fell into a deep sleep. Please don't comment on grammar and be gentle, i'm sort of new at fan fiction. Just tell me what you liked about it and what you hated! Thanks! @WAH well, i don't really like ppl commenting on grammar unless they're nice about it! Because i'm sensitive about stuff like that, and it's mostly because i KNOW my grammar is horrible and my teachers don't teach shit! @Alex it's a fan fiction based off of the underworld series.

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Honestly, it ticks me off when authors say "Be gentle" and "don't comment on grammar cause I'm sensitive". You will never become a great author if you can't learn to take constructive criticism. Just sayin.... It was hard to follow, mostly because there weren't transitions between ideas, and half the time I couldn't tell who was talking unless I backtracked until I could find the speaker. And I will be honest, the grammar and punctuation needs to be fixed, but as this is your rough draft, don't worry about it at the moment. The only punctuation I will say to fix right now is please put in commas. And periods before the speaker talks: Selene sighed, <comma "Well, Just an example. It makes it easier to read. I liked the names you picked, they were perfect for the characters in my opinion. The idea is very unique. You did mention this is a fanfiction. What book are you using to write this? Good luck! I hope I don't sound mean, I'm not trying to be, I'm just telling you what I liked and disliked. I liked the story, I disliked the fact that you dont want constructive criticism when you want to be a better author....

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